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-:undertaker:-
08-11-07, 17:21 PM
http://img67.imageshack.us/img67/1135/np2028794197iazaif5.gif
Thoughts?, personally i'm quite proud!
As I said on Habbox its wicked for a first alt! Way better than my first!
Try alting some new furni next!
Jiraffe
09-11-07, 12:49 PM
As I said on Habbox its wicked for a first alt! Way better than my first!
Try alting some new furni next!
YEP TRUE ^
Amazing for a first alt. 9.5/10!
tully4leanne
13-01-08, 12:39 PM
dan, very nice :D
JimboJosh
13-01-08, 14:04 PM
nice, i like what youve done witrh the screens
only bad points i can find is the smoke from the chimney, try make it look like the habbo clouds instead of a spraycan and also the pool should have some depth to it
8/10 overall
Dj-parrface
21-01-08, 21:03 PM
yeah, dan that is really great for your first alt, maybe if you carry on from that and start adding on some harder stuff and even maybe animate it? :o
That is pretty good for a first, i'd recommend dimming down the hotels colours a bit as they are a bit garish, also i wouldn't use the spray can for smoke as it gives it a bit of a 'molded' look if you get what i mean, also don't always rely on black to be the outline of buildings, try using lighter lines where the light would hit and darker lines when not so much light would hit, if i were you i'd give this tutorial a look as it helped me when i was beginning;
http://www.19.5degs.com/element/834.php#c2